Admiral Hollis Posted March 28, 2008 Posted March 28, 2008 (edited) ((Clack's Quarter's))::Darius rested comfortably in his good chair amidst the smokeydark room. It was the first time he had visited his quarters sincethe ship return from its accidental plunge through space. With hiseyes shut, he listen to the sound of the ship's engines as they sangtheir lullaby for all that could hear and comprehend its language.He heard several crewmen as they make their way out of the turboliftsituated at the end of the corridor. Two of them sounded to be in themiddle of an argument concerning something that occurred duringdinner.::Chen: =/\= Chen to Lt. Clack. =/\=::Reaching over with his bad hand, he fumbled with his COMM badge.Steadying himself, he activated it with his arthritic fingers. It wasmiserable to suffer with such a debilitating condition and yet be soyoung,::Clack: =/\= What can I do for you commander. =/\=Chen: =/\= Hello, Lt. Just a quick thing about tomorrow. I would likefor you to be in the beam down slot after Dr. Calhan's group. I amassigning you with repair and restoration of the colony's powerstation. =/\=Clack: =/\= We will be there at 1000 hours tomorrow. Can we expectany help from the natives on this one? =/\=Chen: =/\= There will be a representative there at the beam down pointthat will coordinate with you on the repair efforts. =/\=::This was excellent news to Clack. Restoration of the entire powersystem will be a difficult task given all the reports he had read concerningits present condition. Any assistance would be greatly appreciated.::Clack: =/\= Any additional help will be appreciated. Everything is set. =/\=Chen: =/\= Good, I will see you and your team in Transporter Room onetomorrow morning then. =/\=Clack: =/\= Goodnight commander. =/\=Chen: =/\= Goodnight. =/\=::Closing the link to Chen, Darius took another drink from his glass.Looking down at his empty glass, he thought the situation strange.The liquor always seemed to vanish just as quickly as he could replicateit. Upon rising from the chair, he found his legs to be very unsteady as hemade his way over to the replicator.::Clack: =/\=Clack to Ensign Sharkey=/\=Sharkey: =/\=Sharkey=/\=Clack: =/\=Ensign, please report to me in Transporter Room one 1000hours tomorrow. You will accompany me, along with Sweeney andMorningstar to the planet's surface.=/\=Sharkey: =/\= Yes sir but … =/\=Clack: =/\= Is there a problem? =/\=Sharkey: =/\=No sir, it is just in the original plan Jenkins …=/\=Clack: =/\= Plans have changed. =/\=Sharkey: =/\= Yes sir. =/\=Clack: =/\= Tomorrow morning 1000 hours.=/\=::The link closed as Darius took the newly replicated container of 20thcentury Canadian Whiskey from the counter. Clack didn't really feelcomfortable taking the young woman along on the mission consideringshe had just recently been assigned to the ship. Wayne Jenkins wasstill recovering from a sever concussion and could serve the ship in abetter capacity in the engine room. Pouring himself another glass ofwhiskey from the fresh container, he settled back into his chair andproceeded to notify the others of their appointed meeting the next day.Once the others were informed, he poured himself another drink andwaited in his chair quietly for the dawn.::Lt Darius ClackACEOUSS URSA MAJOR Edited March 28, 2008 by Admiral Hollis
Ilene Torza Posted March 29, 2008 Posted March 29, 2008 This is a good SIM. In it we get to see a bit of Clack's internal thoughts. I'm intrigued enough to want to find out what is medically wrong with him. There are a few tense-issues in the first paragraph that make it hard to get into but the rest is a nice, solid SIM. I like how you point out that a task as simple as tapping a com-badge can be difficult for Clack in his condition. Nice job.
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