+ Clase Drene Posted March 3, 2008 Posted March 3, 2008 (edited) ((Main Engineering, USS Discovery-)VANNINI: Syrak, I need you to go to the Main ComputerCore, Vargas... you to Second Core... I need you tohack the Captain's code. I'll try to disable theAuto-destruct sequence.VARGAS: Aye Sir!SYRAK: Yes Sir::Syrak got to the main computer trying to disablesubroutine, to activate the self-destruct, butrealized this was already too late, Syrak mind frozeas he strained as hard as possible to think on whatwould his next move would be, he thought aboutreplacing the subroutine, but then that wouldn’t stopit.::SYRAK: oO cutting out the entire power will stop allpower, it should stop the… no if the chamber isalready open then that’s just suicide in pitchblackness… izaya OoVANNINI: (yelling at the remaining personnel in M-Eng)I want you all to head to the Pod ASAP! (Yelling atSyrak) Lieutenant, you are in charge of Engineering inthe Pod... now move people!SYRAK: Sir, I just like to suggest that your lastoption should be—VANNINI: No time for arguments, that was a directorder! Get out of here!::Syrak gave a nod, hoping his boss, would havethought a warp core breach like he had, It would havebeen the last thing Syrak would have chosen, but withless than fifteen minutes, there wasn’t going to bemuch choice soon… ::SYRAK: Vargas, and Everyone follow me…::Syrak and Vargas walked into the corridor, and hefroze, swiveled round swiveled round, to face to seethe engineers in the engineering, Syrak had realizedthere was no turbolift to the pod, they couldn’t getthis many engineers into pod with less then 15minutes, neither could they get them with otherofficers, and civilians going through that way.Fifty-four engineers stood blankly at Syrak, Syrakturned to Vargas and then faced the engineers::SYRAK: ::tucking his arms behind him:: Now there is noway we will efficiently evacuate this proportion ofgroup, I will split you into four groups… firstthirteen engineers step forward will follow lieutenantLambert to Transporter Room 4 on Deck 7.::the group was still standing, and Syrak let a sighout and step forward tagging people::SYRAK: you, you, you, you… you will all followLambert, get moving crewmen… time is dissipating…right you, you, you, you…::Syrak tagged another 13 engineers, beforeannouncing::SYRAK: you will follow Lieutenant Mittal toTransporter room 3… ::moving closer to Mittal::Lambert has took the aft turbolift, please take thefore Turbolift…::Syrak watched several alien species follow theIndian officer towards the turbolift, and thenselected another thirteen engineers and assigned themstraight directly to the pod, their Team leader wasto be Chief Bharijtk, the experienced Chief Pettyofficer escorted them, and then there was 14 of themleft, and Syrak announced::SYRAK: the rest of you are with me c’mon…:: Syrak began taking strides noticing people headingtowards the lifts no one selecting the tubes, theyoung Vulcan had already assigned 40 engineers to thelifts and knew they were lacking time, and as more hesaw more people walking onto the corridor, he saidlooking for a tube entrance along the corridor::SYRAK: I Expect the lifts will be busy, So We’re goingto take the tubes… its only ten levels and then 3 tothe pod…::Syrak opened an entrance into the tubes, there helet all the crewmen get in and crawl, he spottedKaschenko, and Vargas was the last one in as he gotin, and left the door open::TBCLT JG SyrakACEOUSS Discovery-B Edited March 3, 2008 by h92o
James T. Kolk Posted March 4, 2008 Posted March 4, 2008 I like this sim in that it does a good job of showing Syrak's quick thinking in a tense situation. He's got definite command potential. But, unfortunately, there were a lot of gramatical errors throughout, so I wouldn't rate it among the upper echelons of all sims ever written, which is a hard bracket to get into anyway. But, all in all, it show's a good officer doing his best in a situation we all hope to avoid: the imminent destruction of the starship we call home. Well done, Lt.
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