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  1. As someone who draws stickfigures and does mockups she then gives to people with actual talent to turn into something awesome, I love this! It's a cool little piece of art, but if I am totally honest, what sold it was your explanation. The topic of rebuilding is something that has always fascinated me, and maybe that's why I love the post-war Cardassia stuff so much. I like that you put this into the context of a colony we do not get a follow up on, and I agree - I like to think that they rebuild their homes and lived happily ever after (or until the next disaster. This is Star Trek, after all). 

    Thanks for sharing! ❤️ 

  2. I have not yet had the pleasure of writing with @Anthony Meeks yet, but I wanted to highlight this scene in particular. AIne's frustration is something I honestly expected her to keep her mouth shut about (and gulp down with a bottle of whiskey), and it was a surprise to see her actually articulate it. At the same time, it says a lot about Green that he looks out for her. He's a bro, and I love that! 

     

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    ((C.O.’s Office, Starbase 118))

    When he arrived on the station, Lt. Commander DeVeau had offered him actual quarters but he hadn’t had time to consider them. Well, after the last couple of days were over, and he finally had a moment to stop, he took her up on her offer. It had been about 34 hours since he last slept, so he grabbed a quick shower to wash off the dust and was asleep before his head hit the pillow.

    When he woke, he stirred briefly in the new bed and it took him a moment to orient himself to where he was. This wasn’t unusual considering the nomadic life he had led in the Corps. It always took a second or two. Shaking the cobwebs off, he sat up and swung his feet over the side, feeling the low carpet under his bare feet. He made little fists with his toes, gripping the low shag between them. He asked for the computer to turn on the lights.

    The replicator was across the room and he called for it to make a hot cup of black coffee. It was only a few strides to get there, and in those simple movements, Isaac was awake and starting to feel refreshed. He drew the mug from the orifice in the wall and turned, taking a breathy pull from the top of the steaming cup. On the table, a flashing light caught his eye. His PADD had a pending message from the Commanding Officer of the station, requesting his and Lt. Sherlock’s  presence in the C.O.’s office in just a little over an hour.   

    Isaac dressed in the Marine utility uniform and set out. He would be early, but that was always preferred over late… or even on time. The Marine decks were several hundred decks below the command level towers, and where Commodore Taybrim’s office was, and based upon Isaac’s experience getting around on the station, it could take a minute to get there, and it did.

    He had only arrived in the lobby a few minutes before the scheduled meeting time. He found a chair in the lobby and was about to sit down when he heard footsteps approaching. He turned to see Lt. Sherlock crossing the small area. She crossed the room like she knew what she was doing, a woman on a mission, and gave Isaac a quick nod as she approached and passed him. He fell in behind her and she entered the Commodore’s office without pomp or circumstance. He had to admit to himself, he was impressed by the young Security Chief.

    The office was large, but what Isaac expected for the Commanding Officer of a large station such as SB118. He expected to have the C.O. at a desk, but was caught a little off guard when he encountered the man standing to greet them. The setting was far less formal than he thought it would be. Isaac stood at attention as the commodore greeted them.

    Taybrim: Lieutenant Sherlock, thank you for attending.

    He tipped his head to Aine in pleasant greeting, and Aine returned the nod, smiling as best she could.

    Sherlock: Welcome back, Commodore.

    Taybrim: And Lieutenant Green, I’m sorry that this is our first meeting and I wasn’t able to welcome you on board before this all transpired.  But I am glad that you were with us.

    Green: Baptism by fire, Sir. It’s good to finally meet you, Sir. 

    Sal gestured to the seats across from him and the coffee on the table. Aine wasn't much of a coffee person, but right now, the hot bitterness sounded comforting and she poured herself a mug before taking a seat.

    Taybrim: I want to start by saying thank you for coming and commending you and your fellow teammates on taking swift and decisive action.  

    Sherlock: Lieutenant Green here did commendably. As did my new Ensigns in Security.

    Green: Thank you, Sir. The crew on this station was absolutely incredible, Sir. ::Turning to Sherlock:: Your Security teams were top notch, Lieutenant. That’s testimony to your leadership. 

     

    Isaac had gained a lot of respect for Aine and her leadership style. She led from the front, rushing into the fray alongside the newest ensign, prepared to do whatever she needed to do to get the job done. There weren’t many who worked that way. She could have just as easily ran her part of the operation from the I.C.


    Taybrim: I understand it was not ideal by any stretch of the imagination.  But I also recognize that you and your teams prepared for what we could rationally expect.  I think elements of this incident went far beyond expectation.

    Green: I would agree, Sir. 

     

    Aine took a gentle sip of the hot coffee. There was a slight sting on the tip of her tongue, but she didn't care.

    Taybrim: Can you tell me what you both felt was the biggest concern or challenge you faced in this incident?

    Green: The sheer size of the area of operation, Sir. The event spanned multiple areas, creating incidents within incidents, and when communications went down, it was difficult to maintain interoperability and a unified command. 

     

    Isaac was reporting as he saw it, knowing the only way to improve for the next event was to learn from the last one. He had learned long ago, what happens in an event was training for the next one. 

     

    Sherlock: Secrets, Sir.

    Aine’s answer wasn’t what Isaac expected to hear. He couldn’t help but look over at the Security Chief, wondering what she meant.

    Taybrim: ?

    Sherlock: I feel so many missions in my past, and with this one, there are people who compartmentalize information. And if you objectively look back on what happened, each time, everything could have been stopped had someone just said something.

     

    What she was saying wasn’t incorrect, but in the world of government there is always compartmentalization of information, disseminated to those who need to know when they need to know. Who decides who needs to know is often a mystery to those who don’t need to know. Isaac knew this from experience, but he also understood Aine’s frustration, so he sat quietly while she aired her concerns.

     

    Taybrim: ?

     

    Sherlock: We didn't even need to know everything. We've all seen enough weird ::beat:: stuff...out here. If he'd even said there was a suspected time traveller trying to mess with the timeline, we could have had so much more to go on.

     

    Again, Isaac sat quietly and listened to what Aine had to say. It would have been nice to know exactly what they were dealing with, but in his experience that was never the case, and likely would never be the case in the future. That was the nature of the universe they lived in.

     

    Taybrim: ?

    Aine was becoming frustrated, she bit her lip again.

    Sherlock: Yes, there are things that are classified beyond certain people's clearances, but not every bit of information is classified or violates Starfleet regulations if it is shared. And frankly, Sir, I've lost twenty crewmates in my time in Starfleet, twenty-one if I count myself being clinically dead on Rin...::she paused knowing she wasn't allowed to speak that name::...I'm tired of people not doing the right thing and others paying for it.

    He had listened intently to what Aine was saying, and even agreeing a with her on some level, but he was starting to get concerned for her. He leaned in toward her and whispered to her.

    Green: ::In a whisper:: Throttle down, Lieutenant. You’re getting dangerously close to the line. 

    He could understand where she was coming from. It wasn’t ever easy to be kept in the dark, and when there are casualties that in hindsight could have been prevented if information had flowed down to the boots on the ground, frustration and blame are often the result. Somewhere, somebody could have done something to save lives, but instead hid behind the wall of “it’s classified”. He had seen it before, and would definitely see it again.

    Taybrim/Sherlock: ?

     

    Hoping he hadn’t crossed the line, he continued. He had seen many of his compatriots, and friends, over the years ruin their careers by not staying in their lane, and he was worried Aine was about to do that now. He had stood on the same battlefield with her, and he was not about to watch her stomp on her career without saying something about it.

     

    Green: I’m sorry, Sir, but if I may have a moment with Lieutenant Sherlock?

     

    Taybrim/Sherlock: ?

     

    Green: Lieutenant, may I speak to you outside for a moment?

     

    Taybrim/Sherlock: ?

     

    It was awkward as hell, considering he was new to the crew, and the look Aine gave him was cold enough to make him wish he had brought a jacket. Regardless, he couldn’t let her shoot herself in the foot. Standing, he motioned toward the door and followed her out. As soon as the door closed, he spoke.

     

    Green: What the hell are you doing?

     

    Sherlock: ?

     

    Green: To be frank, you were out of line in there. I couldn’t let you shoot your career in the ass.

     

    Sherlock: ?

     

     

    Tag/TBC

     

    1Lt. Isaac Green

    Marine Officer 292 SFMC

    Starbase 118 Ops

    R238801IG0

     




     

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  3. I very much enjoyed reading the ending to our current mission as written by @Alora DeVeau
    It's a bittersweet ending to an important part of the character's backstory, and what I like in particular is how well narrated Alora's emotional response is. It really emphasises the gravity of what happened, and makes it all the more admirable that Alora puts her feelings aside and focusses on role responsibilities as acting CO. 
    Well done! ❤️ 

     

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    ((Commercial Center – StarBase 118)) 


    He stood there before them, a manifestation of hatred, face twisted in 
    unfettered malice.  The man was there to kill, to destroy everyone and 
    everything because all that he loved himself was gone, taken away, and 
    in its place it had left a rotting corpse of a soul.  He was walking 
    dead, for there was nothing and no one worthwhile to him any longer.  It 
    was the sort of hatred born of excruciating sorrow. 

    No one mattered.  Not her.  Not Kalin.  Not even himself.  All that he 
    could see was that all around him were gone.  He didn’t care if he 
    destroyed them, the starbase, or, truthfully, all of the galaxy. It was 
    frightening.  And yet, Alora knew he wouldn’t win.  He *couldn’t* win. 

    DeVeau: Time is not on your side! 

    Nniol: Time is on no one’s side.  Death is on my side. 

    It was true.  Time was on no one’s side.  It carried on, heedless of 
    those who were forced to ride in its waves.  In times of plenty, in 
    times of want, in times of joy and in times of sorrow.  It was 
    indifferent to all.  And yet time could be twisted, its robes knotted, 
    and that was exactly what had happened to Kalin - and what Nniol 
    wanted.  And while time watched, dragged on by whatever mechanism the 
    man had managed to construct to manipulate it, one hand dragged the tip 
    of the knife across Kalin’s arm. 

    DeVeau: No! 

    Alora managed to shove Kalin out of harm's way, avoiding the death 
    blow.  It only angered the assassin more, and he gathered himself 
    together, ready for another strike.  The sound of thunder roared, but it 
    felt so far away, as if they were under water, the sound muffled and 
    blurry. 

    Nniol: This ends now. 

    Teser: ~ Alora. ~ 

    She heard his voice, the sweet, deep tone of it filled her mind, but it 
    did not bring solace.  Within she could hear an eerie calmness. Somehow, 
    in the midst of everything, all the world came to a standstill. 

    Teser: ~ Give me your hand. ~ 

    Her gaze lifted to meet his, emerald and ebony, locked together. His 
    fingers grazed hers, their hands collapsed, and their thoughts melted 
    together.  Past and present locked in an embrace as the two remained in 
    the midst of the frozen moment of time. 

    Their minds touched, danced, merged, two people almost as one. Memories 
    filled them both, and it didn’t matter the origin.  It was them.  
    Theirs. Their story.  Their lives from the minute they had intersected.  
    He flooded her with his own, she with hers, a river that flowed back and 
    forth between.  Those moments were gone, swept away in the stream of 
    minutes, hours, days, and years that had passed them by.  Those precious 
    moments, every minute together savoured in that exchange.  She 
    remembered.  Every instance.  Every breath.  Every single second with 
    him, the belligerence, the sarcasm, the resignation…the eventual shift 
    that had turned into tenderness.  Into love. 

    But they were in the past, moments that had come and gone, left behind 
    for they could not linger in the sweetness of the now, for time waited 
    for no one and trudged onward.  Time…twisted and diverged, but even if 
    they were to go back, it would set course once again and those moments 
    would slip through like sand through the fingers. 

    No. She didn’t want to believe that. They were supposed to be together, 
    to go together, not to relive what had already happened, but to move 
    forward toward a future with each other, whether it was in the past or 
    in a time to come.  It didn’t matter *when* as long as it was with 
    *him*.  She knew what he was saying, though he did not say it.  He 
    didn’t need to. 

    She didn’t want him to. 

    No.  She couldn’t let him go.  And yet even as they held on to one 
    another she realised they had to let go.  She had to.  Again. Forever.  
    There was no return from this.  Not this time.  Her chest heaved, a 
    single sob escaped, and yet she could say nothing. Agonising sorrow 
    billowed deep within, and yet at the same time an anguished resignation 
    to the inevitable. 

    Teser: Come, then. 

    Their hands parted.  Distance separated them.  And as the assassin 
    charged at them, Kalin grabbed the other man’s arm, and then… 

    Alora turned, her face fallen into stunned impassivity.  All around her, 
    those who existed did so in a state of such sluggishness their movements 
    could hardly be seen.  She turned, the air warbling, warping, 
    translucent ripples flowing up and down over everyone and everything. 

    Aine.  Willow.  She could see them, her own form distorted, jagged and 
    broken as if the artist of a drawing ran an erase across and smeared the 
    lines.  She turned again, that time back to Kalin, and though she wanted 
    to run to him, to grab his hand, pull him out and back to her, to keep 
    him with her, she knew what that would do, and who would also come with 
    him.  That living hatred strained toward her, teeth gritted as he 
    struggled to break free of Kalin’s grip.  A dim light began to grow, 
    brighter and brighter, almost blinding and forced Alora to take a step 
    back, one arm thrown up to shield her eyes. 

    Sherlock: Go for DeVeau! 

    Willow: ? 

    She heard the sound of voices, of the women who had come to their aid, 
    rippled and warbling in the wake of the rift that surrounded her. 

    Sherlock: Get the Commander to cover! 

    Willow: ? 

    In an instant, it all changed.  A deep boom resounded and a rolling tide 
    knocked her to the ground; a clap of thunder echoed, then faded.  And as 
    it all wound down, Alora pushed herself up and whirled around only to 
    find the place where Kalin had been a moment before empty. 

    He was gone. 

    Sherlock/Willow: ? 

    Alora didn’t respond, their voices off in the distance as her mind tried 
    to slow down and catch up.  Her eyes sought him out, the tall, dark 
    figure of the man she loved . But he was nowhere.  Not there. Not then. 

    Sherlock/Willow: ? 

    She finally moved, finally turned her head and let her gaze focus on the 
    women talking to her.  Slowly, almost painfully, she pushed herself to 
    her feet.  Once more, she turned back to that spot, but it was still 
    empty, they were still gone. He was still gone.  And he would never return. 

    Her stomach heaved, her chest tightened, the knife plunging and 
    twisting.  For a moment, she bent over, hands against her knees as she 
    took in great gasping breaths, the world spinning around her. Her eyes 
    closed tightly, cutting it off and she focused on her breathing, one 
    breath at a time.  A little.  Then a little more. Finally going all the 
    way, then letting it all out at once.  Her fingers dug into her flesh, 
    the ache of her grip cut into her consciousness, and the voices of those 
    with her linked her to the present reality. 

    It was not a reality she wanted.  But it was her reality.  And it was a 
    reality that she could not ignore or escape.  She had been there once 
    before.  She was there again.  Only this time, it truly was forever. 

    One.  Two.  Three. In.  In.  In. 

    All out. 

    Slowly, Alora opened her eyes.  Slowly, she lifted her head. Slowly, she 
    straightened. 

    DeVeau: I’m all right. 

    The words were whispered, her voice trying to find its anchor, but still 
    feeling adrift.  The space was still empty.  He was still gone. 

    DeVeau: I’m all right. 

    Even if she wasn’t, she would have to be. 

    Sherlock/Willow: ? 

    Licking her lips, Alora finally dragged her eyes away and settled them 
    upon the two who were still there.  Those who remained behind. Just as 
    she remained behind. 

    DeVeau:  Secure the area.  I…I need to get back to the Embassy. 

    Without another word, Alora turned and hurried off toward the collapsed 
    building.  She had to move.  She had to do something. There was much to 
    do, and her loss would have to wait. People were hurt, and they needed 
    help - and she needed to do something.  Her stomach roiled, her heart 
    seared, but she pushed it all aside. There would be a chance to deal 
    with that later, to contemplate for a second time what had been taken.  
    For now, she had to face the reality of the here and now, and of the 
    devastation that had come upon others.  Her own sorrow would have to 
    wait.  Time was on no one’s side - especially not hers. 

    [End scene for Alora] 



     

     

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  4. I absolutely love this! ❤️ Something I personally adore is seeing more background to Sal, and Jamie is really making the most of the current downtime she has with the character. The parallels between Taron and Taybrim are really well done, and I really enjoy how it ties in with 'global' events and personal history. Unfortunately that means I will keep pestering her for more Sal-Solo-Sims :D 

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    J'Lynn: Look at me, Havran. What do you see?

     
    He was a young and passionate woman. One who believed what she said. One who, no matter the future of their separate worlds, was sure to lead hers to a future they sought.
     

    s’Rehu: I don't know you. Tell me what I see.

    J’Lynn: I am the daughter of a politician. A good man. Under the Empire, our family was unremarkable. We were lucky enough to not be impoverished, but we were kept in our place. 

    s’Rehu: And now?

    J’Lynn: If things had remained the way they were, you and I would likely never have met. I certainly would not have dared speak to you the way I have today.

     
    That much was true. No one outside his caste had ever dared even show that much force of character lest they face punishment. But her...she was not afraid, that much he saw on his own.
     

    s’Rehu: And what does the Free State not offer you that the Republic does that allows you to do just that?

    J’Lynn: In the Republic, I have a chance. A chance to grow, to make a difference. To speak without fear of reprisals against me or my family. Not just me, we all do. That is what we truly want and we want all of you to have it too. To share it with us. A better, happier future, where fear really is just a ghost story. All of the Rihannsu. United. Together.

    Havran sat, seemingly emotionless. But inside, something about what J'Lynn had said moved him. It wasn't just the words she spoke, but how she spoke them. With honesty and candor. Coming from a world where no one said what they meant, this interaction was near foreign but believable.

     

     

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  6. Arys just glares at people spitefully and hopes they fall own the stairs. Zumagi knocks them out and THROWS them down the stairs. Thank you for defending my sickbay @EgilRenot ❤️ 
     

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    Nniol: Get off me!

     

    Zumagi: Make me.

     

    So he made him.

     

    Nniol used the handle of the knife, driving it hard into Ivin’s solar plexus. Ivin let out a grunt of pain, but didn’t buckle or falter. He didn’t let it affect him at all. He moved quickly, figuring a stab would be coming shortly after. Ivin was surprisingly fast for such a large man, thanks to a small handful of boxing championship titles.

     

    Nniol: damn you…

     

    Ivin bore down heavily on Nniol, swinging punches and aiming kicks at him. He was hell unleashed, like a berserker from ancient human tales. The assassin spun away and tried to shoot at Ivin once again but Ivin blocked his arm with his own, snarling his next wounds.

     

    Zumagi: Get out of my sight, kasvak.

     

    Ivin wound back and aimed a sharp and harsh kick towards Nniol’s chest, sending the other reeling backwards and away from himself. Ivin lifted his phaser and pointed it right at Nniol’s head with an almost deranged and feral look in his eyes.

     

    The assassin was nearly as deranged if not even more so. He lifted his knife and licked the blood off the blade. Ivin was not intimidated or daunted. Hell, Ivin has the exact same thing far in his past.

     

    Tachyons surged around them.

     

    For a moment the fight replayed as time folded in on itself.  It was déjà vu, except it really did replay.  The moves were slightly different as the two opponents now could predict the moves of the other, having seen them before. Ivin saw all these moves before and reacted with the same ferocity as he was before. He had no idea what was happening, but protecting Foster and the Praetor were his priority.

     

    More shots were fired.

     

    Someone screamed.

     

    And finally, time righted itself as Nniol licked the blade once again.

     

    There was an unpleasantly disorienting static POP and the assassin was sucked back into the same strange time anomaly that deposited him into Trauma Bay 8.

     

    The silence and the confusion was disturbed by Ivin roaring out loudly.

     

    Zumagi: I’m not done with you, bastard! Get back here!

     

     

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  7. Why is this so relatable :D
     

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    ((Ugly little dive bar – The Dungeon))

    This place was ugly.

    It was messy, noisy and bleak.  It stunk like bottom shelf alcohol and depression.  And with the sudden burst of chaos and pain from above, it was also unusually busy for a late afternoon on a random day.

    Because was there ever really a better – or worse – time to wallow in the horrible futility of life and drink yourself to oblivion?

     

     

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    Taybrim: If you want some advice, I was told this by a dear friend when I was a young officer.  

    He grinned, looking a bit impish.  It seemed his advice would be half legitimate and half humorous.

    Renot: ?

    Taybrim: When you hit JG you need to clear up, look sharp.  You’re up and coming.  You want everyone to know you mean business.  But when you hit Lt Commander start to let it go.  By that time you’re a little jaded, a little haggard and you want everyone to know you’ve been around the block a few times.

     

     

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