Popular Post + Hiro Jones Posted March 22 Popular Post Share Posted March 22 Things have been getting crazy on the Da'al homeworld. Commander @Genkos Adea, under the influence of a mood-altering airborne substance, finally had enough of Jiah Kleebohn's crap. (MNPC played by yours truly, and it's been rough being such a prick to the lovely Artemis, but that's simming for ya) I love how this sim is written for a couple reasons. 1: earlier in the mission, I wrote how Jiah attempted to calm her building rage by clenching and unclenching her fists - willing away the urge to hit somebody. In this post, Adea mirrors that motion so subtly and poetically, it gave me literal chills. 2: The internal struggle of this usually calm, collected, mild-mannered Betazoid is laid out in such a believable progression, when he does finally crack, I cheered out loud before I realized he just clocked my NPC. 😅 Give it a read, and let Elliot know how much you love his writing: https://groups.google.com/g/sb118-artemis/c/PK8nHXaPrDc/m/zNWSbPedAAAJ 5 1 Quote Link to comment
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