Rocar Drawoh Posted April 15, 2006 Share Posted April 15, 2006 (edited) Ensign Kaitlyn Rowean, Captain Rhys Bejain, and Captain Rocar.I'll let you decide which is the good, the bad and the ugly.Little low on entires this month. Does anyone else fancy a go? There's still time to post entry.As this competition is really all about the fun perhaps some of you would like to encourgage your crewmates? ...if you are a senior officer encourage your junior officers to have a go. If you are a junior officer... challenge your senior officers to stop sitting on their hands and see if they can beat you in a writing challenge! Edited April 15, 2006 by Rocar Drawoh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Estantia Posted April 15, 2006 Share Posted April 15, 2006 i know that quite a few people have got something in the pipeline... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Horn Posted April 15, 2006 Share Posted April 15, 2006 Whew! Wasn't sure I was going to make mine in under the time limit.For what it's worth.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salak Posted April 16, 2006 Share Posted April 16, 2006 (edited) Still not happy with it, planning to revise some bits in the final few days but I've just posted what I have.The current version has a little note in small italics at the end explaining my thinking. I'll take that off the edit but what is currently there is the main bit. All that might change are certain sentances, a little more detail, improving the wording... We'll see about a possible extra paragraph but that'll only happen if I'm happy with the rest of it before the closing date.EDIT: Can't see how to improve it at the moment. Have marked with the finished tag in case Idon't get back to it. I've deleted the explanation from the end, I'll paste it here so you can read it... Basically, I can see two separate poison apples, and the note points them out...(Marcus Henderson is meant to be the ‘Poison Apple’. My rationale is that the poison apple betrays the person who eats it, who would trust the apple to be just like any other. In this regard, Henderson is a poison apple for Salak. A Poison Apple can also lead to the end of the life of the person who bites it, the poison being the cause of death. In this context, Henderson is also a poison apple for the P’Kothla as his sabotage is the poison which ultimately destroys the vessel, which may have otherwise been able to be retrieved) Edited April 16, 2006 by Salak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toni Posted April 19, 2006 Share Posted April 19, 2006 *phew* Got one in under the wire. Started it a month ago, and forgot about it. *duh*Anyway, good luck everyone. Again you all have really put some great writing into the competition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Estantia Posted April 19, 2006 Share Posted April 19, 2006 I've enjoyed reading the entries for thisc ompetition as usual, and my fingers are itching for the next one already.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerreht Posted April 19, 2006 Share Posted April 19, 2006 Well, if you win, you won't be able to write for the next challenge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salak Posted April 19, 2006 Share Posted April 19, 2006 I'll see what the topic is before I decide to write an entry.Besides, you can write if you win, you just can't enter it. There is the Character Cafe, after all... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julia Harden Posted April 20, 2006 Share Posted April 20, 2006 Well, if you win, you won't be able to write for the next challenge Just make sure you don't win... dun't correct spelin and dont pruff read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Estantia Posted April 20, 2006 Share Posted April 20, 2006 Erm, forgot that minor point about winning, ok, character café on standby then, though I doubt I'll need that, that latest one was excellent... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toni Posted April 20, 2006 Share Posted April 20, 2006 Well, one thing about having until tomorrow for a deadline. We still have today to make changes or corrections, and after I re-read mine, that's exactly what I had to do for correctness. *duh* A silly mistake at that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nemitor Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 is it tomorrow at midnight, or tonight at midnight, or when is the deadline exactly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Estantia Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 that is true, whose time too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nemitor Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 wellim basing it on my time, which is Moutain Time (US & Canada)at midnight tonight, cause im in panic mode trying to finish and edit this thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toni Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 Don't know what to tell you. I am on EST so it would come earlier for me than you. *lol* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nemitor Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 well, if I miss the deadline, im going to be furious, so im going to post it very soon (5-8 hours) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan aka FltAdmlWolf Posted April 21, 2006 Author Share Posted April 21, 2006 Goes on my time, LOL But I'll accept any entries that come in close to the deadline, so long as they're not noon tomorrow anything like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nemitor Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 (edited) okgood, thanks.Mines comin.there you go.mines there. Edited April 22, 2006 by Nemitor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Cody Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 Good luck to everyone! Some excellent work here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toni Posted April 25, 2006 Share Posted April 25, 2006 Absolutely, terrific work, everyone. It all just keeps getting better and so many entering really is nice. Good luck to you all. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Estantia Posted April 25, 2006 Share Posted April 25, 2006 Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nemitor Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Congratulations to the Winner and Runner up!Ill have to try harder next time, I wrote mine over the course of a few minutes, my original one I thougth was terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julia Harden Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Congratulations!!! *clapping* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Congratulations! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest kaldore1 Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Thanks, everyone!And congratulations to EVERYONE who entered!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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