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Clase Drene

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  1. I am just happy that someone actually reads what I have written... They are all good but I don't like to critique it is a fault I am critical of in myself.
  2. ::Bright intelligent mirrors talked to you, stared at you and one another as well. The cosmic mystic spoke first in a bending and broken form of thought patterns leaving others questioning the symbiont that was starting to over power her.:: xoette: Your relative perspectives are in need of focused attention. h92o: Why do you think that is important? xoette: It is important everything is important here. h92o: Not if you think it isn't. xoette: You know even things of that nature are of special importance when you come to them again. h92o: Your lies are only to deceive your selves with not us or even the one that opened the door to our world. xoet: Be kind h92o. ::looking up from the holo-monitor feeds:: xoette: xoet you can shut that door anytime now if you want!! xoet: This is far more interesting then the rest of the planet here. They call themselves Ice Nine yet they are liquid. h92o: You have thought that there was nothing here. You were right, yet we are now, then and until, inside the point solition of salitional dismal spirals that are inside of that. xoet: There are not enough meanings to your riddles Ice Nine. Still there are too many to know exactly what is meant. :: There was a rumbling within the tides of the mountain top lakes like chills of thrills in the tundra and ice. The liquid Ice Nine had shifted itselves into another form one more easily exploitable to the field variations that xoet was modulating in aphasic patterns derived from the natural rhythms of time. :: xoet: I need more time yes if that is what you are trying to say. h92o: What I say and what you think that it means worry me sometimes but not as of usual instances inside of the frame of reference that there is in this. ::There was little that 12 knew of these frames of reference and trying to create life from the time equations that permeated the ebb and flow of life on this planet was beginning to anger 12. Until then there was a solution to the problem of time-space pattern recognition just there was only the slightest changes that 12 could make for things to be effective within the bounds of said time-space patterns. :: xoette: Where did ice nine go? xoet: He did not go anywhere that is just the problem that we are concerned with. ::Xoet noticed in the abyss of the infinite variations there were endless realities forming from one another then dissolving together more or less solving each others problems in perfect progressions of time space and non-space where the non-real and real become balanced into the dimensions of life and existences themselves. For the monitors had been unraveling thread by thread stitch by stitch into the dimensionalities of absolute zero psychodynamics. The superconductor manifolds folded into themselves effortlessly. Twelve had set the systems on what might be considered autopilot but there was something else there as well it was liquid ice in a nine like formation. Now everyone knew that there was the newest new things seen within and out of this time space reference dynamics. :: xoet: What do the reading say? xoette: I am getting no reading at all. Nothing at all. h92o: I was just manifesting myself into both of you at the same time. Sorry for the confusion. xoet: Not a problem just let us know first, ok? xoette: where were we exactly? Before this happened? xoet: I really don't thing it matters do you? xoette: Like I said earlier---It is important everything is important here. h92o: I will be kind this time only draw a line not a lie and remain steady to the course you are on for you are the only one on that (of) course.
  3. Really thought I would not have time to write anything for this one as much as it was a question of time but in the city on the edge of forever there is always endless time to do what ever one feels like...
  4. if I can get the permission of the others on the resolution and there responses are well written I might submit the sim I wrote earlier but there are spelling errors that the spell check did not get such as there in place of there are where I should have put the are in after there so I've got a spelling mistake I guess I am know for that lol
  5. ((Science Lab Observation Room--chamber one)) xoet 12: Ok seven prepare for the helmet by relaxing and allowing your sensations to go null. ::Seven shuttered at the thought of the void becoming real to It. 7 knows this is what must be done and braved up to the situation at hand. :: xoet 7::drifting in the suspension chamber:: Let us get started now. xoet 12: You will find now is a relative term these days. xoet 7::smiling:: And you will find these days just as relative to now as they were then... but philosophy was not your strong point. xoet 12: This will not hurt a bit just relax. xoet 7::nodding with a smile:: Is the helmet on yet? xoet 12: The helmet is in place. ::The helmet was designed at the psionic university for xoet 7 to control the psychokinetic problems It was having with become two beings at the same time. xoet 7 could do this on Its own but the two resultant beings were like one of the good qualities and the other bad qualities. Each had the opposite of the other. The helmet had the latest in psionic engineering and created a balance between the two projections of xoet seven. :: xoet 7: Good I think this will be the try that works. ::touches hand and helmet:: xoet 12: I said no sensations relax your feelings more. xoet 7: Sure that is easy for you to say but being told to relax is very unnerving. xoet 12: quite quite ::Seven left It's body and created a new one at the same time. Suddenly in chamber 2 a body materialized. Both bodies xoet 7 A and xoet 7 B were sensationaless. Twelve shuttered at the thought that It's sibling had created an exact likeness of itself in the second chamber. Twelve was used to the two xoet sevens but usually one was the opposite of the other in emotions and appearance. Here The two sevens were exactly alike. As one turned left the other turned right. A look up was a simultaneous look down.:: xoet 12 oO the helmet is working but where do we go from here? Oo Seven A can you hear me? xoet 7 B: yes A can hear you. xoet 7 A: I know what you said B but you need a helmet too. I believe experimental helmet #9763 failed. We need to start again. Back to the field of head sets. xoet 7 B: I think if we both try to create the helmet on me as well we can do so. xoet 12: I think that would be best the two of you working together even in different chambers. ::Twelve feed the helmet the designs of the helmet itself for it to give the analysis needed to create a second helmet with the help of the xoet sevens.:: xoet 7 A-B: It was/will work. ::Twelve monitored the life signs of Its sibling and its counterpart closely and noted their progress. A second helmet began to form around the front of the head of xoet 7 B. the helmet was the exact opposite of the helmet that xoet 7 A had on. :: xoet 12: Something is wrong. xoet 7 A-B: What? We are working together perfectly. xoet 12: No the helmet was not designed to be recreated backwards there needs to be super symmetry for that to occur. ::Xoet 12 Adjusted the controls to allow seven to reincorporate into one-self again. Walking into chamber one twelve removed the helmet from xoet seven's head and set out to prepare the next version helmet #9764... ::The design was created in a learn as you go type interface for the helmet. Each time there were new problems. Given the fact that xoet twelve did not know what Its sibling could and could not do there was extensive testing that had to be done for each helmet. Once the matrix was solved there were problems with how to use the device and the resulting Doppelganger together successfully. :: ::A transporter like person who could transport themselves across small distances and yet still be where they started at the same time was what was occurring during the final trials of the helmet. There was being in two places at the same time accomplished with the use of the helmet by anyone or could just xoet seven do this with Its new helmet? This was where the breakthrough came. :: ((time warp to the next significant improvement?)) xoet 12::Whipping sweat from between the eyes:: ok we have helmet # 10354 and a whole team of workers trying to get this one to work. Are you ready seven? xoet 7: I don't even feel the helmet. xoet 12: That is because it is almost entirely embedded into your skull. xoet 7: So when this one fails what do we do? xoet 12: We have encoded a self correcting and adjusting super symmetrical pattern buffer where we are linked directly to your brain and the computer. xoet 7: ...so if the helmet breaks I break? xoet 12: Be positive! ::Just as fast as twelve said that the other seven, seven B appeared in the next chamber, chamber two. With both sevens realizing that the other one was aware of themselves they stood at the window between the chambers. Smiling to one another in greeting they spoke. :: xoet 7 A/B: Hello seven ::they said in unison:: :: The sevens became fascinated with one another. For them it was like looking into mirror and yet the mirror was in three dimensions. The confusion disappeared. There was truly two sevens both a copy of the other. They both asked to visit one another in the control room. :: ((the control room)) xoet 7 A/B: ::in awe:: Wow it worked but still I sense you and your surroundings as much as mine do you do the same? ::in unison then laughing:: xoet 12: Ok that is the separation technique now the reincorporating. ::The sevens looked at xoet 12 then each other as a third one appeared between the two of them. :: xoet 12: :: Blinking five eyes all at once:: ok enough fun and games put yourselves back together... xoet 7 C: What is happening? ::looking at twelve and seven A/B.:: no I am an individual I exist now. ::What had started as an experiment in being two places at once and an almost pretending there were two made real sevens like looking in a living mirror the experiment had developed bad side effects. That being the continuous creation of seven look a likes filling the control room. :: xoet 12::Groaning :: Something has gone terribly wrong again. Lt. xoet twelve Science Officer Duronis II Embassy
  6. I would assume that being on a starship would put me in two places at once hence the theme I plan to use pretending to be in two places at once the title as of so far is.... pretending it is so...near? of course depending on how the rewrites go that will probably change in the end yet still the theme will be kept
  7. ok this time there will be many a rewrites... I want to thank Captain Rhys for their comments and agree with all of them except the similarities with Sanskrit lyric poetry ... I am not sure if I have read that stuff or not although during the writing of the "poem" I was also reading the lotus sutra so that might of influenced the "poem" the next writing will be in SIM form and I have already started on it but I also know it needs a few rewrites before I read the review... Just my first Writing Challenge and I wrote it on the fly and It can be considered a first draft ... I may do some rewrites and put it in the poetry cafe forum section if that is allowed?
  8. is it all right to brainstorm in public places I mean I have some ideas I am pretending are worth typing here but well that might just give me away before my writing challenge is finished hummmmm pretend I am playing a game? pretend I am playing a game at not playing said game pretend like I know what I am doing pretend like I don't care pretend like I care pretend like it matters or like it does not matter There has to be a middle ground between pretending and not pretending?
  9. excellent work Julia I hope you dont mind if I make my next writing challenge submission of SIMilar form !!
  10. now won forward and backward the letters can lie either way [won-now] now-here yet no-where the movement of the line in a word where the meaning is same exploding into the nights of sunless fires with and without selflessness becoming realities edgeless edges on the scope of tomorrows time the window into the past two months spent inside the other side of nowheres won ton of moments focused into two then bursting into infinite infinities when there was something true to be the precipice of lights return in a dilated time framed by surface interfaces of friction and antifriction sliding bending into voids unknown to thought or mind, when or hows if there is a way it was exposed to soon perched on the edge of death and waiting, perched on the light rays of knowledge where dissonance and harmony find peace as one xoet placed the window to life and the window to Its death inside Its pocket and left the shelter of bliss again rummaging into the garbage tumbling and sliding back and fro with everything into nothing again and again having life to thank and perfection to curse knowing the unknown with every flicker of shimmer into the universes of of love and of hope of joy and bliss of course and corrections abide by night's fall and mornings call alike like a dove to a view of the world that was once ours and free from the humdrum of needless excuses why by the way we go and the thoughts are so owned into the fluid grip of It's mind when there were others to be besides Itselves. Lt. xoet twelve reporting for duty woken from the big sleep to find itself back where it was again and again outside the loop of life Itself once more...
  11. as the roots of the mutant tree was exposed to the surface of time's window the branches of realities multiplied exponentially from every moment that is yet there it was and would be where It could, xoet shattered the window in Its mind for it was all a dream xoet had dreamt when It was born and when after It woke up it woke down as well in the places that 12 held so dear to thought but everything was not were it was left when xoet was non-born and inside itself still there was hope for a new beginning when things would all start again from nothing yet as balanced realities merged into one that was xoet's mutant tree opening eyes to new skies and riding into the sun setting inside the window of time becoming the edge of life's infinite realities where everything is now parted Then the structure of evolution parallels balanced forming networks point singularities where everywhere is nowhere and one day becomes openings into non-existence of existence during the endless night and it is always forever now but not then till after waking to place everything back into places of importance and just hopeful evolutions timelessness's selflessness's one in two 12 thought it knew what was happening, not
  12. the window of time split and exploded into and infinity of windows where every moment of xoet's life it could see and as the windows congealed of times past present and future three the windows in motion and pulsating xoet was now obsessed with itselves in side the windows in their moments verily exposed inside 12's chamber of life as the love of itself became true No more could xoet explain the either the real or unreal ness of the window for it was both real and unreal and neither at once where prefect and imperfect became one with itselves inside the existence and non existence between itself and without but with before and after and now when the time of life ended again but there we are all of our selves moving into the past and future and now beings but being and nonbeings were where both and neither yet into and between them ripples out from the past into the future were becoming the nexus of the now ages of neither born nor dead alive and yet free of life perfectly imperfect yet perfect on the planet of hope and born of thoughts where there were none in the mystical life where did the window of time come from was this the dream it had woke to again?
  13. Your values are off xoet said to itself in the window of time go to your future of you not the past and me were we will see how to know ourselves inside the lives we lead where they want to be and to see them as they are real for now is the moment that becomes the moment in your mind and my mind become divided in two divided in three of the past present and future yet there is another we know too well see where we have the circle of time dilation's into growing existence if know to use the present ways to be free where we craft the future shapes our selves divided into to the five eyes each a dimension of timelessness insight of light created and logged like bookmarks for years to come and years to be gone where there is no sense of life or love just a daily intake of food and sleep we see orders of lore when nothing becomes expressed as symbolic logicalness forward on the video of times recorded events and into them we can see our past as it was their future records of sound and space intense relenting abiding by life's choices are few as if it ends and life beginning again your future's future
  14. I have an Idea for future challenges that might be good and might be bad but I think we can discuss it here what if every writing challenge was a poll were the poll was the grading of the challenge it could be that we would have the judges votes and the popular votes as well
  15. Now is one and time has past into the future of us created by we We are one and the past has changed again for the sake of us 2 for even in between the realities of nothing and everything there I am into you a blur of a dream you had looking out the windows windows to infinity where nothing becomes a real existance going moving beyond that and before this there is ever present nothings yes more than one and the answer is answered to be known nows where the tree has died to become the seeds of life into and of its Itselves divided inside the perfect posture where love and life are You travel into voids as everything you become, nowhere forever there is a way to slip before you see yourself inside the window of time is not the answer but freedom rules the tides of lives and love
  16. The distortions grew like the mutant tree xoet planted long ago as the image of itself grew to infinite dimensions, time flux, questions kept coming from the image from the past and now xoet answered I am not now nor was I then here and now nor then and there but..... I am with you here now your time is less you future is more you grow I am at fault for the fault for told was the fault I am now and will be so I leave you with the following questions to ponder because I ask them too when you know answers we two will be one again why is that unanswered when the question divines Itselves into two are you still one of the answers Soon you will no the answer is yes yet unknown to the first mistake made left on a planet for dead why did you go to the lifeless rock you thought peace you no know peace and yes there is only the end of where you were going to be
  17. The way I am approaching my story is each time I go to add something I am or consider myself as the future self communicating with the last future self that typed the entry before not sure if that is OK or not but since this is my first writing challenge I guess I will approach the idea that way...(Hopefully It will get me out of my circular reasoning)
  18. what had once been just a window to lookout now was a look into xoet's eyes Greetings xoet this is you from the future, you made me what I am today you gave me the ideas I have made real today, because of you I have survived because of you I hate you for keeping me alive to tell you I hate you keeping me... xoet was confused by the future xoet saying these things to It why was It getting blamed for things it had not done yet but will do only to tell it self in the past that It was going to make the same mistakes over. xoet spoke to Its future self to ask questions of It this seemed to be the solution when are you there now? And why is it my fault? how can I do it differently as xoet talked to its own distorted image thru the window of time the distortions grew
  19. Time like the putty that xoet shaped with its hands or the ideas that created its likeness and then disappeared the form and functions of the likes of which have never been yet there it was in front of xoet the window to anytime it would choose what to look at what not to look at but when when what was going on and when it took place perplexing as a seed in the ground and then a tree the seed has to be planted yet the window was solid as a diamond masking the definite shapes it formed and solidifying them into matter and energy what had once been just a window to lookout now was look into xoet's eyes
  20. This will probably be my first writing challenge entry I don't know what to write so I guess I have to look over the other writing challenges and put something together about windows mmm windows a tentative title I have so far is "The windowpane melted into the ground" or possibly floor depending if I decide to be inside or outside of the window you know looking in or looking out ... guess I have to decide which side of the window I am on ahhh I know a dialog thru a window maybe...
  21. A window by any other name is still a window. Just don't shut the window on my fingers. Jumping out of windows again I see. My first finger painting was done on a window when I was two I will not tell you what I used as the paint...lets just say at that age I did not mind the smell... I was told from then on I was an artist ...
  22. My class was back around October 2002 like I applied in the middle of October and then started the training a little later. I don't remember any one from my class except maybe one person. It has not been till the past month or two have I even showed my face in the forums.
  23. Will___________________38% Spock_________________43% the traveler____________65% Wesley________________44% the duck_______________31% a nanobot______________.01% borg___________________34% schizo________________-2i+10% alive___________________42% dead___________________56.1% avoided_________________52% hurt_____________________8.7% happy___________________69% freaked out_______________50% reasonable________________22% beyond__________________0/0 % weird____________________100 % geekish__________________33&1/3% psychic__________________3.14159...% de evolved_______________e^2PIE + i % liquid____________________99.9% temperature______________55 evil_____________________31/63% good____________________25/99% neutral___________________1/0% baboon___________________e=mc^2 special____________________X% edited____________________all the time...
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